http://lylithj2.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] lylithj2.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] stripytights 2014-07-29 01:45 am (UTC)

Oh wow.
I thought the ending would be tragic or fluff.
This was full in your face gritty!
The last paragraph was haunting!

There was so much about this I loved. The fact that you recognize the blinding need to reproduce even at someone else's cost. The fact that the corporations and government had worked together to create a problem based on their own greed. And the freaking hot sex at the beginning.

Thank you so much for completing this and writing such a interesting story! And especially for not ending it with fluff!!!


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