Beautifully written. Having almost everything an interior monologue heightened the emotions, and made their lovemaking (for that is the ONLY word to describe it) exquisite. I felt like I was there, overwhelmed by a sense of frenetic urgency, yet wanting this first time to last forever. (Perhaps, because it might also be the last.)
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Date: 2013-03-18 12:28 am (UTC)