I actually hadn't realised until I reached your comment at the end that you'd written this whole piece without any dialogue - so I think that tells you it worked! It was really intense - and built up to the climactic sex so well, it felt like I was being taken apart along with Dean. I really loved all the analysis, such an insightful way to bring on some very hot porn!
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Date: 2014-09-14 07:36 pm (UTC)