That was interesting! It seems there's more to Jensen than meets the eye. Up until this point all my sympathy was with Jared, but considering that Jensen actually listened to Jared, and was willing to let him drive the sex...hmmm. Makes me wonder what's going on with him.
It also looks like there's a possibility that Martin could provide a point where the two can learn to work together. That would be so helpful--it'd certainly make me feel better!
I like the mystery here with the psi rating--what was it that Jared felt if it wasn't Jensen?
I don't know what it was that made you unhappy with this chapter, but I think it's really working for your readers and I think it did a good job of moving the story along and building a believable framework for Jared and Jensen to at least become friends.
Thanks for sharing this--looking forward to your next update.
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Date: 2012-11-14 03:01 pm (UTC)It also looks like there's a possibility that Martin could provide a point where the two can learn to work together. That would be so helpful--it'd certainly make me feel better!
I like the mystery here with the psi rating--what was it that Jared felt if it wasn't Jensen?
I don't know what it was that made you unhappy with this chapter, but I think it's really working for your readers and I think it did a good job of moving the story along and building a believable framework for Jared and Jensen to at least become friends.
Thanks for sharing this--looking forward to your next update.