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Title: Missing Piece of the Puzzle
Fandom: Supernatural RPF
Chapter 7/7
Pairing: Jared/Jensen/Gen and all combinations.
Word count: 8212
Content notes: dubcon, mpreg, dystopia, sort of slave fic
A/N: With a huge massive thanks to plinytheyounger for her enthusiasm and her beta of this chapter - any mistakes that remain are entirely my own.

Additional warnings for this chapter: strong issues around bodily autonomy concepts, pregnancy, dehumanization,

Previous Chapters found here:
1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6

Summary: In a world where women can no longer have children, genetically engineered Omegas fill this function- if you can pay the price (and live with the consequences.) Jared and Gen are happily married, and buying Omega Jensen Ackles for the birth of their child seems like the perfect solution. The only downside is that Omegas can't survive the birth of a child- and that by design they degenerate after a certain age. Not that Omegas know this.

As the chapter is over 8000 words, I've decided it's simpler for once to update just on AO3. The new chapter can be found here. Feedback either on AO3 or on this entry is very much appreciated, especially as this is the final chapter

Date: 2014-07-29 01:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lylithj2.livejournal.com
Oh wow.
I thought the ending would be tragic or fluff.
This was full in your face gritty!
The last paragraph was haunting!

There was so much about this I loved. The fact that you recognize the blinding need to reproduce even at someone else's cost. The fact that the corporations and government had worked together to create a problem based on their own greed. And the freaking hot sex at the beginning.

Thank you so much for completing this and writing such a interesting story! And especially for not ending it with fluff!!!

Date: 2014-07-30 11:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stripytights.livejournal.com
Thank you very much - I appreciate the comment and also that you liked the non-fluffy ending! It was the sort of story that needed that little bit of bleakness without tipping over into complete soap territory. Thanks again!

Date: 2014-07-31 05:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gypsy-atavari.livejournal.com
Just finished reading this in one go and wow, what a world you've created. Very interesting and I liked all the characters progression throughout the fic.

Jensen's reactions through to the end rang true to me. And I'm glad that both Jared/Gen did the right thing though I believe they'll never repair their relationship with Jensen.

That last paragraph. Wow, what a sucker punch. I had an inkling that they were probably recycling the Omegas. But not that they were so isolated that they hadn't figured that the rest of the world had already solved infertility.

Such an interesting fic. Thanks for sharing. :-)

Date: 2014-08-24 01:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stripytights.livejournal.com
Sorry for such a late response - thank you so much for the comment. I'm really glad Jensen's reactions rang true, and you found the fic interesting! Thanks again.

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